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Accident


They walked out of the elevator into the almost vacant parking lot. She stumbled, he held her.
"You've had way too much to drink today. I think you should get a cab."

 "I'm fine. I can totally drive. Don't worry so much, honey!!" she said nonchalantly. He tried to talk sense into her, but all in vain.

 She got into her car and sped out of the parking lot. He stood there and stared helplessly as her car vanished out of sight. But he could not stop worrying just like that!!! He rushed to his car and buckled his seatbelt.

 He was about to leave when his phone rang.... it was her!!! She had probably realised her foolishness. He answered it only to hear a strange voice at the other end...

 "Aap madam ko jaante hain kya?? Unka accident hua hai!!!"

                                                      ------- MocktailMommy Prasanna

 Word Count : 141

                                                          Linking this post to #FridayFotoFiction by Tina and Mayuri


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22 comments:

  1. Anagha Yatin14 October 2017 at 08:59

    Ooff!! Indulgence at the cost of life...thats sad
    Poignant take Prasanna!

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    1. Unknown14 October 2017 at 09:02

      Thank you Anagha!! At times people don’t realise how much their reckless actions can cost them..

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  2. Unknown14 October 2017 at 09:49

    Talk of premonitions. Nicely done.

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  3. The R.Viewer14 October 2017 at 21:24

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    1. The R.Viewer14 October 2017 at 22:07

      He: Kahan...? Ok.. serious h?
      Stranger: Sirji, pee ke gadi chala rhi thi. What else to say?
      He: Bhai... Could you please inform me which hospital they've taken her? I don't have guts to come to accident spot. I'll tackle police..
      Stranger: HOSPITAL..???!!! The sexy Audi RS7 is battered. It's towed to some Ramakant Garage. Say goodbye to original parts. Your original gf is perfectly safe. Audi main thi. Nano main nhi. She's here..le bat kar.
      She: Hel..Hello... I've met...
      He: I'm busy. (Disconnets the call)

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    2. Unknown14 October 2017 at 22:25

      Awesome continuation to the story!!! Maybe we can collaborate for short stories😊😊!! Thank you for visiting our blogpost..

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    3. WriteMighty15 October 2017 at 01:13

      Such reckless behaviour often results in fatal accidents. People don't realise the serious repercussions of drinking and driving. They risk not just their lives but many others too. A very gentle reminder that life is precious. A good take on the prompt, Prasanna.

      Rashi Mital
      He Waited For Her

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    4. The R.Viewer15 October 2017 at 03:09

      Traffic Police got a blogger!!!

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    5. Unknown15 October 2017 at 03:39

      Thanks Rashi!! Very rightly said by you....LIFE IS PRECIOUS!!

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  4. The R.Viewer15 October 2017 at 03:07

    Sure!
    There are many deaths on Friday Foto Fiction than in India! Every week koi na koi Marta hain. OR has cancer OR gets disabled. Then the comments are like "How sad. But he died nicely. Beautiful words"

    I'm like wtf!

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    1. Unknown15 October 2017 at 03:41

      Marne ki baat kisne ki???? Mujhe toh aapka version sahi lagaa 😂😂

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  5. G16 October 2017 at 02:15

    That is so sad but a harsh reality

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    1. Unknown16 October 2017 at 04:55

      Absolutely Gayatri...hope future generations are more responsible...
      Thank you for visiting our blog!!!

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  6. Gaurav Yadav17 October 2017 at 05:25

    I think the main motto of this #FridayFotoFiction is to promote writing and imaginations. doesn't matter, the story is same or the concept is same. Attempt is important and you have done a good job.

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    1. Unknown18 October 2017 at 11:16

      Thank you so much for the encouragement & supportive words Gaurav!!!

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  7. Deliciously Alive17 October 2017 at 07:35

    Drinking and driving is never a good idea, and you couldn't have stated it better!
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

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  8. Tina Basu19 October 2017 at 05:46

    People tend to take their lives too easy. What is so cool about being sloshed and driving! But people do that inevitably. Sad. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction

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  9. shalz7523 October 2017 at 19:43

    Wow- this is so neatly penned Prasanna; I dont understand why we do this bravado when common sense dictates we give over!!!

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    1. Unknown23 October 2017 at 21:10

      Thank you so much Shalini!! Your support means a lot!!!

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