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Crossroads



It was her last day in Mumbai. After landing a plum post at a designer label in Paris, she was all set to start a fresh chapter of her life.

 He was waiting for her at their usual hangout. But today it was different. She was no longer his employee and he was no longer her boss. All the formalities were struck out.

 They had been the best of friends for the last ten years. All of a sudden, he felt as if his world was turning topsy turvy.

She reached for his hand, held it firmly and said, "Dont look so sad...You never know, I might change my mind!!"

 He held her hand in return. "I love you, Tanya. Have felt this way for long but never had the guts to confess.... Is that good enough for you to change your mind?"

 SHE FOUND HERSELF AT CROSSROADS AGAIN....

                                      ---------- By MocktailMommy Prasanna

 Word Count : 150

                                     Linking this post to #FridayFotoFiction by Tina and Mayuri

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20 comments:

  1. Unknown9 October 2017 at 22:05

    Nicely done, Anagha

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  2. Gaurav Yadav9 October 2017 at 22:11

    This is Beautiful. We have limited words, otherwise it can be a very interesting short story.

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    1. Unknown9 October 2017 at 22:46

      I seriously felt that constraining this time Gaurav....there was so much more I wanted to express in this story!! Thanks for your appreciation!!

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  3. Deliciously Alive9 October 2017 at 22:32

    Oh-oh! She is at crossroads indeed! Hope she makes the right decision!
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

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    1. Unknown9 October 2017 at 22:50

      It’s exciting to think about that...thanks for the super prompt!!

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  4. Akshata Ram9 October 2017 at 22:40

    ah that was a lovely take on the prompt- tricky never easy

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    1. Unknown9 October 2017 at 22:51

      Yes Akshata, tricky indeed!! Thanks for stopping by..

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  5. G9 October 2017 at 23:24

    Things left unsaid till last minute can turn so many lives upside down. I wish he hadn't waited till it was too late

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    1. Unknown9 October 2017 at 23:39

      Very true...wonder why people don’t express their feelings. Thanks for your support Gayatri!!

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  6. Sudha10 October 2017 at 01:10

    Wonderful short story. It took ten years to express his feelings! Probably life would have been different if he had said earlier .

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    1. Unknown10 October 2017 at 01:53

      Probably the thought of her leaving made him insecure..thanks for your appreciation Sudha!!

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  7. Anagha Yatin10 October 2017 at 02:16

    How I wish, he joins her at Paris and they hit off together! Let her cross over the cross road with him and not stop by!
    A pragmatic tale Prasanna...
    - Anagha from Team MocktailMommies

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  8. Unknown10 October 2017 at 02:17

    That could be one good way to take the story ahead....one of the roads to take. Thank you for your kind words Anagha!!

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  9. WriteMighty10 October 2017 at 07:18

    This can turn out to be a beautiful short story. But, I would want Tanya to pursue her dreams in the end while her partner waits for her. Why always do we find women at crossroads esp, between their career and love life. If you happen to continue the story, do let me know. :) Cheers!

    Rashi Mital
    Live It Young

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    1. Unknown10 October 2017 at 20:32

      It’s so exciting to see how many ways this story can go. Will definitely let you know if I carry it forward. Thank you for sharing your views with us Rashi!!

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  10. Pratibha12 October 2017 at 01:52

    Life and the turns it takes in a moment ..

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    1. Unknown12 October 2017 at 05:21

      You never know what happens next!! Thank you for visiting us Pratibha!!

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  11. Tina Basu12 October 2017 at 06:34

    This is a difficult situation for anyone Prasanna, I'm not sure what I would do if I was in this situation! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.

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    1. Unknown12 October 2017 at 10:47

      Thank you for your appreciation and support Tina!!

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