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The Holy Pyre

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Aashna sat in front of the mirror at her dressing table. She was all decked up, but her mind was restless.

 Just then her mother came in, "Aashna, it's time darling...." As she walked out to the ceremonial mandap, all eyes were on her. There was a storm brewing in her mind though.

 Being an arranged marriage, she had hardly got any time to get to know Varun. Everything had happened in such a hurry.

 As they walked around the holy pyre to complete their pheras, she was totally absorbed in her own apprehensions..... But he read her eyes.

 He held her hand gently, "Dont worry Aashna. I promise you in front of this holy pyre, that I will always be there for you. Through thick and thin, through ups and downs, through sickness and health. I will be your friend, soulmate..."

 The lines of worry on her face disappeared!!!

                                                    -------  By MocktailMommy Prasanna

 Word Count : 150

                                                            Linking this post to #FridayFotoFiction by Tina and Mayuri 

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18 comments:

  1. Anagha Yatin23 October 2017 at 21:54

    A very heart warming tale, a fairy tale ending any girl would wish for!

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    1. Unknown23 October 2017 at 22:03

      Fairy tale ending indeed Anagha!! Thank you for your words of appreciation & valuable support.

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  2. Deliciously Alive23 October 2017 at 23:55

    That is such a lovely gesture by Varun. These are the little things that cement a relationship.
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction Prasanna.

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  3. Unknown24 October 2017 at 00:01

    How I wish every person would understand the apprehensions of a bride during marriage & support her like Varun did.. thank you for your appreciation Mayuri.

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  4. Gaurav Yadav24 October 2017 at 05:34

    Those who are not married can comment on this? ;)

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    1. Unknown24 October 2017 at 05:37

      Of course they can....I would love to know their views..hehe😄

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  5. Monika Davessar24 October 2017 at 06:36

    God bless the couple and u too who authored this tale

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    1. Unknown24 October 2017 at 08:40

      It’s very kind of you to wish them well & wish the same for us too!! Thank you so much Monika!!

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  6. shalz7524 October 2017 at 10:00

    Perfectly worded sentiments to ease the fear every woman feels on her wedding day! Well written Prasanna

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    1. Unknown24 October 2017 at 10:06

      Thank you so much Shalini!! Your words of praise mean a lot to us!!!

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  7. Tina Basu25 October 2017 at 07:56

    aww... this is so heart-warming and romantic! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.

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  8. The R.Viewer26 October 2017 at 06:27

    This one was the best. Instilling confidence in a girl...or anyone who is afraid...is the mark of a good human. Good positive turn Prax! Loved it.
    - YZ

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  9. Pratibha26 October 2017 at 08:44

    Very sweet tale.

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  10. Namratha31 October 2017 at 09:29

    I love happy endings�� Well, who didn't?

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