School mates then… life partners now!
Coming from different faiths, but harbouring same feeling helped us sail
well. Was it easy?’ Varun mused. Of course not but with Valeria by side, I
can handle anything!
His thoughts were aptly listening to
self.
Migrating to Australia, we have left
the scrutinizing eyes back at the borders. However, something is amiss now a days. She
is not so much into me. Why otherwise, Val, would like to meet me here, at
the café, halfway through the day?
Tap on the shoulders brought Varun back
to present. Here was Val. She was glowing. Settling in the opposite chair,
she pressed his hand.
“Someone has arrived in my life, Varun”
Varun was shocked. His face turned purple,
mouth went dry.
“Why are you wearing this look? What’s
on your mind? Graduate up to be a “Papa” now! Is this not what we longed for?”
------By MocktailMommy Anagha
Word Count: 150 words
Ha ha - nice one! You built the suspense of a mystery man initally but it turned out to be a visitor of another kind!! Goo done Anagha
ReplyDeleteI just wished to play around the insecurities of human mind.
DeleteThanks Shalini for visiting and sharing your views!
aww now thats a sweet ending :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajlakshmi for visiting. I am glad that you loved the positive end of the tale.
DeleteA story represents the thinking ability of the writer and I must say you write well. Good Luck.
ReplyDeleteOMG! Thanks Gaurav for lavish praises! You made my day dear!
Delete- Anagha
Awwww! Such a cute story! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat imagination you have :)
Thanks Sushmita for visiting us! Thank you for the appreciation!
DeleteWow such a cute story. Loved the mystery built through it
ReplyDeleteLife is mystery, isnt it? Same mystery happened to the couple and it just shaped out to be a tale for me this time.
DeleteThanks Gayatri for dropping by.
Such a cute twist in the story!!! Loved it!!
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Thanks comrade! Glad that you liked it!
Delete- Anagha
How adorable was this surprise! Your story got me smiling, Anagha! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction
Happy surprises are always welcome in anyone's life! I am glad that this take brought some moments of cheer to you!
DeleteIts been a great journey so far with #FridayFotoFiction and its growing stonger!
Thanks for visiting and appreciating, Mayuri.
- Anagha
Thought as much its about the baby- sweet one Anagha
ReplyDeleteHa ha... yes at one point of time, even I thought its becoming predictable!
DeleteThanks Akshata for dropping by and sharing your thoughts.
I guess the give away for the long relationship. ;) Did think it will be a baby. A nice take on the prompt. Makes you smile for sure.
ReplyDeleteLoved this thought of "give away for long relationship"! Indeed could be the best reward for the lovey dovey couple of years!
DeleteThanks for dropping by!
Loved it. Even in such a short story you could bring in suspense. I will have to read again to see how did you do that magic with words.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you enjoyed the story Varsha. I am flattered with your kind words!
Delete- Anagha
I always love the magic u create in your stories . This graduation is the most loved one .
ReplyDeleteYeh most awaited and coveted graduation! Thanks Monika for all the love!
ReplyDeleteOh the joy and the coincidence I chose the extreme end of this situation !
ReplyDeleteExactly... I also thought the same when I read your tale! But that means infinite possibilities of the tales in between too!
DeleteThanks for visiting and spending quality time with us!
- Anagha
wow Anagha, this is is too cute! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tina for visiting and appreciating!
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