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Arrival


School mates then… life partners now!  Coming from different faiths, but harbouring same feeling helped us sail well. Was it easy?’ Varun mused. Of course not but with Valeria by side, I can handle anything!

His thoughts were aptly listening to self.

Migrating to Australia, we have left the scrutinizing eyes back at the borders. However, something is amiss now a days. She is not so much into me. Why otherwise, Val, would like to meet me here, at the café, halfway through the day?

Tap on the shoulders brought Varun back to present. Here was Val. She was glowing. Settling in the opposite chair, she pressed his hand.

“Someone has arrived in my life, Varun”

Varun was shocked. His face turned purple, mouth went dry.

“Why are you wearing this look? What’s on your mind? Graduate up to be a “Papa” now! Is this not what we longed for?”



------By MocktailMommy Anagha
Word Count: 150 words
Linking this post to #FridayFotoFiction by Tina and Mayuri


26 comments:

  1. Ha ha - nice one! You built the suspense of a mystery man initally but it turned out to be a visitor of another kind!! Goo done Anagha

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    1. I just wished to play around the insecurities of human mind.
      Thanks Shalini for visiting and sharing your views!

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  2. aww now thats a sweet ending :D

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    1. Thanks Rajlakshmi for visiting. I am glad that you loved the positive end of the tale.

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  3. A story represents the thinking ability of the writer and I must say you write well. Good Luck.

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    1. OMG! Thanks Gaurav for lavish praises! You made my day dear!
      - Anagha

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  4. Awwww! Such a cute story! :)
    Great imagination you have :)

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    1. Thanks Sushmita for visiting us! Thank you for the appreciation!

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  5. Wow such a cute story. Loved the mystery built through it

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    1. Life is mystery, isnt it? Same mystery happened to the couple and it just shaped out to be a tale for me this time.
      Thanks Gayatri for dropping by.

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  6. Such a cute twist in the story!!! Loved it!!

    Prasanna from Team Mocktailmommies

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    1. Thanks comrade! Glad that you liked it!
      - Anagha

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  7. How adorable was this surprise! Your story got me smiling, Anagha! :)
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

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    1. Happy surprises are always welcome in anyone's life! I am glad that this take brought some moments of cheer to you!
      Its been a great journey so far with #FridayFotoFiction and its growing stonger!
      Thanks for visiting and appreciating, Mayuri.
      - Anagha

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  8. Thought as much its about the baby- sweet one Anagha

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    1. Ha ha... yes at one point of time, even I thought its becoming predictable!
      Thanks Akshata for dropping by and sharing your thoughts.

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  9. I guess the give away for the long relationship. ;) Did think it will be a baby. A nice take on the prompt. Makes you smile for sure.

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    1. Loved this thought of "give away for long relationship"! Indeed could be the best reward for the lovey dovey couple of years!
      Thanks for dropping by!

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  10. Loved it. Even in such a short story you could bring in suspense. I will have to read again to see how did you do that magic with words.

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    1. I am glad you enjoyed the story Varsha. I am flattered with your kind words!
      - Anagha

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  11. I always love the magic u create in your stories . This graduation is the most loved one .

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  12. Yeh most awaited and coveted graduation! Thanks Monika for all the love!

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  13. Oh the joy and the coincidence I chose the extreme end of this situation !

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    1. Exactly... I also thought the same when I read your tale! But that means infinite possibilities of the tales in between too!
      Thanks for visiting and spending quality time with us!
      - Anagha

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  14. wow Anagha, this is is too cute! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.

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