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Twin Trouble


“Show up on board. Your time has run out”, declared a stern voice.

“Pirates, this is the last warning. Show up. This is Capt. Whodunit from coast guard ship Virat”

“You can’t hide for long. Surrender and save your lives”

“What’s the guarantee of that, Captain? Black Pearl had never succumbed to empty threats. Don’t dare board our ship. Come closer at your own peril and get doomed. That’s my promise. Promise of the genuine pirate”, snide the scornful voice

Splashing of water guns followed. The screams and shouts of “Ahoy” from both the ends filled the air. And an ugly fight erupted.

“What’s happening in here? You two naughty munchkins! Enough of wasting the water and fighting. Do you want to spend the entire summer in this bath tub with your toy ships?”, Said Mom, rushing into the bathroom.

“Aye, Aye” came the chorus reply from Vidhi and Nidhi, the twins!
  
 ----By MocktailMommy Anagha
Word Count: 151 words

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8 comments:

  1. Ha, lovely twist. As a father of twins I recognised this and enjoyed :-)

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    1. Oh, is it? Good to know that Ian!
      Thanks for dropping by. Glad that you enjoyed it!

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  2. The twist at the end is a masterpiece ��

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    1. Thanks Lavanya for appreciation! Glad that you visited us!

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  3. Hahahaha! Cute twist at the end! Great story!

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    1. Happy that it got chuckles for you, PJ! Thanks for visiting and reading my tale.

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  4. That was precious! Beautiful story here, Anagha.

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  5. Involving the kids and their innocence in the story, not just real life, adds to the twinkle of it!
    Thanks Varad for visiting and for appreciation!

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